I Wrote A Rap Song, Can You Please Tell If Its Good…don’t Hate Or Make Fun Of It..just Give Tips Or Comments?

here it is:
“Look into my eyes you don’t see Pac or Nas, You see a ***** with game, a ***** that’s untamed, I don’t need Hollywood fame I got the streets chantin my name, only a certain number of rappers are as real as me, before I pop I take a deep breath and give it a count of three, cause I know its still gonna be the same, I know who CNN gonna blame, I’d rather do it silent, make your *** disappear like David Blaine, I was a hood *****, now I’m ballin crazy out the game, I’m commin from the darkest hour, even this chronic tastes like sour, I’m so tired I’d rather jump in a lake and take a shower, I ride slow in my phantom just the way I should, Don’t be surprised if your homie gets killed for his shoes in the hood, my life is so slow, my lambo don’t even that fast, lambo horse power my Louis vuitton ***, huh…now days we got **** to express a laugh, all that lol jk trash, to this microphone I sing, I’m falling like I injured my left wing, I’m not a baller I’m a money machine, hip took a head shot the day Pac got shot, next thing you know hip hop takes Chris rock, Chris rock ain’t even got **** to do with rap, but Rick Ross said it gets deeper than the rap, the government ignores, ***** who are we, could you imagine what the f*ck is Louis with out out the V, its f*cked up, the young thugs ain’t no one to look up, yo Michael tell MLK I’m sorry the future f*cked up, tell Corretta Scott drop on your knees put your hands together and and look up, weezy said “gods got a bless and a spare”, I’m looking for hope but the question is “where”? Throw that patron in the air like a flair, I’m cool with royalty as long I get half of the share”