Looking To Go To Disney Family Of Five Kids 2, 4 And Six First Timers Driving From Ny We Are Looking To Stay?
off site poss at a vacation home. stay is 4 days due to school schedule any sugetions where to stay and how to get the most out of the 4 days shoudl we do just magic kingdom?
If Your Pet Ate A Magic Mushroom And Grew 50feet Tall, Would You Be The First Person They Would Eat…?
~Would they eat you?
~not eat you ever?
~eat your neighbor?
~Eat the school mate that rejected to go out on you on a date, and the only reason your pet knows know who it was, is because you kept crying all day in from of them and wouldn’t shut up about it….
Please Read This First Chapter Of My Story And Tell Me What You Think?
This is half of chapter one for my new story. I am 11 years old and I dream of being a writer. Tell me what you think and How I can Improve it
Thanks So Much
Chapter 1 Images.
It was 2am on a sunday night. Hikari was still awake. Tomorrow would be her first dat a new high school. Hikari Blaine was 15 years old. She would be a sophomore this year. She has long curly brown hair to about her waist. She was very beautiful, with her glistening blue eyes and her perfect body. People at her old school in Hilton Nebraska said she was a goddess of beauty that is Hikari never seemed to think of herself as that. Some how she always knew she wasn’t like the girls at her school. She and her adopted parents moved all the way from Nebraska to a small city in Ohio called Niles. Of course the boys a Hilton High School were sad that the most beautiful girl was leaving. On the other hand the girls were thrilled. Today they arrived to their new home in Niles. Hikari did not get to see much of the city. She was laying in her bed, thinking of her future to come. Her birthday being only to months away and getting her license. Mr. and Mrs Blaine had promised Hikari if she got good grades from when she was in 4th grade to now, they would buy her a car. A nice one at the fact. Jenna Blaine was a TV reporter for one of the most watched news in america. David Blaine was a doctor. He got transferred to Niles, which is why they moved. So they had good money. Hikari looked at the clock. It was 2:07 am. She was tired, but excited all at the same time. Minutes passed and she quickly drifted to sleep.
The alarm went off beeping. Hikari woke up to darkness except the light comming from the windows. She yawned and looked at the time. It was 6:30 am only 4 hours since she layed in her bed awake. When she went to her closet she picked out a pair of blue jeans and an elbow length black shirt. Hikari was so unsure of what to do with her long brown hair. So instead of putting it up she brushed it and let it fall to her waist. She dug through her drawer of every hair product known to man and found a black headband and slipped it into her hair. She looked in the mirror and saw beauty. Hikari put on her light make up and walked out the door.
Hikari walked to school since it was only a few streets over. When she arrived at Niles High School, she walked to the door, not stopping to anyone that said hi. She was about to open the doors when she saw something. An all black motercycle speeding to a parking spot. Doing all sorts of dangerous manovers. When the mystery person was parked and started to take off the helmet. The helmet was set on the rear end of the bike and the girl was revealed. She was beautiful. More beautiful than Hikari. She had long knee length black hair, light skinned, like Hikari, and she semmed not to notice or even care how people looked at her when she walked past. This beauty was comming coming towards the door, walking in piercing black wedges with ripped jeans and a short black tube top. Hikari acted fast and ran inside the door and down to the office. She was guided by a dozen signs saying Office left. The lady behind the desk was buff and seemed to be around the age of forty.
“Yes, can I help you” she saud with a crack in her voice.
“Yes, Im new here. My names Hikari Blaine” said Hikari.
“Oh yes dear, new meat, I mean new student. I have your class schedule and locker number right here” said the lady. Holding out 5 pieces of paper.1 her class schedule, 2 a map, 3 a lunch menu, 4 a locker number and code, and 5 a piece of paper that all teachers, the principal and her parents have to sign.
“Your locker is in Hallway E, last one on the left.” she spoke again.
Hikari nodded and walked down the hallway. She was not thrilled by the school so far.
She felt a suddon tap on her back and she swiftly turned around. It was a girl. She was tall, slim, and pale. She had shoulder length blonde hair.
“Hi” she said with nerv.
“Umm hello” said Hikari.
“Im Demmy. You must be Hikari. Am I right?” she said
Yes, your correct” replied Hikari.
“Do you wanna be friends”? Demmy asked.
“Ok”
Their conversation picked up when they walked to their lockers. Some how Demmys locker was right next to Hikari’s.
Hikari examined the students around her. There were nerds, rockers, muscle men, and all your regular high school groups. Her view was going good until she caught sight of someone across the hall way. It was the girl she saw at the door. Glaring her down.
“Hey demmy” said Hikari.
“yea, whats up”?
“Who is that girl” Hikari pointed to The girl.
“Let’s Just say a Freak. Replied Demmy
This is not the full chapter 1 if you want it email me!
I am so sorry its long
Thank you for reading it
This girls name is Hatchet. You can learn more about her if you want to read more of my book and follow the adventures.
Email me at Sarahcracker101@aol.com
Thanks
Of These Celebrities, What’s The First Thought That Comes Into Your Head, When I Say,?
Tom Cruise
David Blaine
Regis Philbin
Dolly Parton
Rosie O’Donnel
Kelly Ripa ?
Going To Disney World For The First Time, And For Two Days. How Much And What Can We Do?
Two parents, 11 year old and me, 14 years old. We’re going to get the park hopper tickets (think) for the four parks in mid/late april. We’ve never gone before and I’m in charge of the itinerary. I printed out the park maps and wow! That’s huge. Way more than two days worth of stuff. We’re going to get there after the park closes and spend the night and be there in the morning then stay there all day, go back to the hotel, spend the whole day the next day and then drive back to my grandfather’s place (about 1 and a half hours away).
Is it worth staying at one of the disney hotels or should we get a hotel room outside of disney? Inexpencive Hotel suggestions? Also, do you know the cheapest resteraunt(s) at disney? And does anyone have any information on the firework shows and the best place(s) to be when you see it? We were thinking ti would be nice to watch the fire works at epcot (or so we heard that they’re their) over dinner, but not sure if that’s possible. Do we call and reserve something?
I’ve learned about the fast passes but not sure if they’re worth doing If you can only get one ever two hours.
So what should we see (we’re firt timers and all). Definitely Not to interested in meeting the characters. We’ll definentally hit space mountain and splash mountain, but asides from that what else are the must see’s (minding that we’ve only got two days there).
We’ll definitly spend a whole day at magic kingdom (I’ve heard that’s where you get most of the ‘disney’ experience) unless you think we’ll have time for more. as for the second day, I have no clue and need some help.
So answers/tips/suggestion/advice would be very much appreciated. I’ll be definentally picking a best answer for this question (10 points or whatever you get for getting best answer).
P.S. Is the animal safari worth our time? I’ve heard the whole Animal kingdom is like a zoo, but to me that everest mountain thing sounds fun…what do ya’ll think?
What Exactly Is The Feeling U Get When U Preform On Stage? (i’m In My First Musical)?
our show date is ticking closer and closer and I’m getting nervous. everyone says its like magic…but I want other opinions. we r expected to bring an audience of 1500 a night. we r just a high school musical too!
gosh im sooo nervous!
Which Movie (for First Date) Is Better?
I am thinking of going to the movies for the first time with my (girl) friend and I want to ask her but I cant until i figure whch movie to see.
So far I have thought of 2 movies to to take her to: Speed Racer and Narnia. Speed Racer is action/adventure, very exciting to watch, racing sci-fi, etc.. Narnia is pretty much about magic and other stuff that she might like.
Since i’m getting the tickets do I pick the movie I want to see or go to the movie she wants to see to make her happy (if she’s happy, i’m happy.)?
Anyone got any tips?
