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Please Rate My Manga (sorta) Plot On A 1-5 Scale! Read It All!!?

admin — Sat, 20 Feb 2010 23:04:39 +0000

Set in a world where all the planets within the Milky Way and the life on them are connected by the Interstellar Monorail, two years after the discovery of magic. Sam (if you have a good last name to fit into his character that would be great) is a teenage boy who spent his whole life being raised by an uncaring criminal father who, do to the drugs and his constant drinking, would give him beatings each day, causing him to learn martial combat and Filipino stick fighting as a way of defending himself. One day, at school he receives an assignment to find and write to an pen pal. He chooses Wendy (again, I haven’t thought of a last time) who is a student practicing hypnotism on a different planet (although she is human) and tells her all about his troubles. She invites him to run away from home, and enroll with her in the magic school, and he agrees. The day he is due to arrive via the Monorail, a local weapons-master bounty hunter named Harvey (by the way, at this time there is an economic decline, causing more people to become bounty hunters than to join the army or police force) is wrapping up a job to remove an entire rogue association, but when Sam arrives at the station, there is a terrorist attack and everyone runs away except for Sam, Wendy, And Harvey. They fight back the terrorists who belong to an organization called Chalixe, bent on destroying the Monorail and the worlds it connects in order to achieve what they believe will be perfect peace and harmony without a species to enjoy it. After the three have defeated the terrorists, they decide to form a bounty-hunting group, and the rest of the series follows them as they stop criminals and fight back Chalixe members, discovering truths about the organization. I also want to try to replicate that ‘no specific era’ that Hiro Mashima does in Rave Master, with swordsmen and blacksmiths mixed also with punk rockers with machine guns.

Fanasy Fiction Book I Read, It’s Characters Search Out Magic Gems? Read More Details .?

admin — Fri, 19 Feb 2010 07:43:43 +0000

The main character goes to a school and becomes a monk that trains to use the gemstones. I think it is about necromancy (not sure). He then travels by boat to a remote island to gather the stones after a show deposits them on the shore. Each type of stone has its own propertys.
I read this book ages ago and cannot find it in the stores. If anyone knows the the name it would help me out. Thank U.

Fanasy Fiction Book I Read, It’s Characters Search Out Magic Gems? Read More Details .?

admin — Fri, 19 Feb 2010 04:52:53 +0000

Long, But If You’re A Real Man/woman Read It (+hp/general Fantasy Fans Needed) Dw No Excerpts Or Anything:)?

admin — Thu, 18 Feb 2010 14:05:53 +0000

–Sorry in advance for the length. As I sad, be a real (wo)man and read it all!! I really need help on this :/
Have you ever been trying to write a book and then gotten depressed because someone has said its similar to something else?
I can promise that I havent read Harry Potter, and its also really depressing that my friend has compared my story to it because HP is so popular. I don’t want to be compared when I’m published, because I don’t want my book scrutinized.
There are these similarities, supposedly:
1. My story has a magic school
2. My magicians use wands
3. My story involves immortality and souls
It’s disheartening and I don’t want to lose my motivation to write, because I’ve spent years creating my fantasy world and I have weaved up the plot, characters and everything COMPLETELY myself
Things in my defense are:
1. My story is set in the 16-17th century, and the school is simply like a regular magic school in a fantasy book, like plenty of other books, not some hidden place in our day and age. The school is also not so important to the plot (important enough to be necessary but not directly relevant to my main story — only two chapters are set there)
2. I have an innovative magic system that I think is quite fresh, and wands are necessary, so I can’t change them, and there’s no shouting out of words or anything (I dont want to reveal this)
3. Immortality and Souls are also crucial to the story, and are the driving force of some the antagonists. I did not know HP had immortality in it, but I’m sure Rowling isnt the first person to use either of these. I’ve thought up ways for my characters to be immortal
Could you please tell me what you think about these things? Soften it if you have to lol.
Also, in my story, when a body/vessel is damaged enough their soul will escape. This is ‘death’. One of the antagonists is a man with his soul stapled to his body with magic. His body heals near-instantly, and so if he’s ‘killed’ he won’t ‘die’ because his soul remains til his body is functioning again — making him immortal (as he just gets back up). That’s not like Voldemort, is it?
He’s not the only immortal, but the only one that might be similar.
Thanks in advance folks (y)