How Is My Story So Far?how Can I Make It Better?
I felt the warmth of the sun on my face and I heard birds singing to the tone of walking on sunshine. I stretched my arms up so that my body formed a Y and yawned then I threw the covers off my body and sat up and slipped my feet into a nice, soft pair of fuzzy slipper. I walked over to my dresser and grabbed a silver hair brush and ran it threw my hair, It was as smooth and shiny as a brand new chocolate bar, I looked deeply into the mirror to see my hazel eyes turning yellowish. I smiled and walked out to the hallway and as I walked down the stairs, I felt unsettled, something was troubling me and I did not know what it was. I had just woken up, but that could not be my problem. It was the stairs! They were gripping me by my slippers. They were squeezing my feet. Then suddenly they let go. I lurched forward and then backward. I nearly fell forwards and could have rolled down them perhaps even to my death. But, why?
“Mom the stairs are misbehaving again!!” I yelled but I didn’t hear a response “Mom?” I yelled again. I couldn’t move and I felt helpless, I finally got the stairs to let go of my feet and I was able to continue. I walked into the kitchen and looked around to find a pink piece of paper on the table. It was from my mom it read…
Dear Avis,
Sorry I was not here when you woke up but I had to get to work.
Mr. Pearson called saying there was an emergency at the Department
Of Magic, and they needed me in right away. See you when you get back
From Tredwing.
Love,
Mom
I threw down the note and anger, how could she do this to me, I walked over to the fridge and got out an apple. I bit into the apple and the juice flowed into my mouth, I walked up the stairs and into my room. I made my bed then looked around my room, walls the color of dark chocolate and cherry colored diamonds covered the wall and windows framed in heavy red velvet drapes. The window is large, covering most of the north wall and overlooks the valley in fall transition. The canopy bed is covered in Taupe Egyptian cotton sheets with a satin border cover the extra soft queen size mattress. To lay there is to lay in a dream. More pillows than necessary clutter the mass expanse of the headboard. The layers of quilted blanket provide warmth on the coldest nights. The mahogany of the bed make it a safe harbor in a troubled world. I sighed thinking how long it would be till I saw it again, I grabbed my large suit case and filled it with the school uniforms, my spell book, my extra clothing, Itouch, laptop, art stuff and more. I got changed. I wore a thermal 3/4 sleeve length beige shirt with little flowers on it. I wore a brown cami underneath. With it, I wore a corduroy brown/tan plaid mini skirt with plum leggings and moccasins.
I grabbed my broom and suit case and flew off towards the bus station, it was exhilarating. I watched the clouds float by as big cotton balls. My ears had popped and hurt but I loved it. I went on my first ride before they changed the rules, We could not fly in the mortal world but I didn’t care I loved flying. I felt I was in my living room again. The sun was high in the sky and it was a beautiful picture. The rush of the wind I my face and then the bus station was coming up ahead.
I landed and walked into the station, I tucked my broom in my suit case and walked up to the counter. I saw a man step out from the back “Yes Ma’am how may I help you today?” He asked and I looked at how he was dressed, he was wearing a red and black suit with black dress shoes and a gold tie. The gold name plate read JOSH I looked up at his face “Yes Professor Milton told me to tell you ‘Sweet trip to candy land please’” I said and the man nodded and looked around. Then he pushed a button under the desk and the book shelf opened up and I hurried in.
Do You Think This Is A Good Story Idea?
Okay, I have a book (well, three), I’m not done yet, but it’s about high school kids, and basic high school life, but 1) The kids are genuises, and 2) some of the kids have powers. The first, and most complete is about 2 girls who become popular, and then are ditched, basically, and no one likes them. Then they meet these guys and make friends with them (They sit next to each other in alphabetical order, so…). There are alternating chapters between these four, and also three others, who go to another school (They’re not genuises.). One is super-popular, and the other two are, well not so much. One is mentally insane, but no one really knows, and the other, is well, just normal. The insane one is the second in command girl at the first school’s step-brother (No one really knows until the second book, though.) It gets complicated, though. I think it’ll either be a hit, or not, because some people who like magic books don’t like cliquey books, or romance(has that, a little). So…
Story Title And Other Charicter Help?
I am currently writing a novel (not to be published) about a girl named Sora(need last name) and her friend who go to a magic school(needs name) for fairies, witches, elves, angels, etc. Sora is an outgoing preppy fairy and the main char. while her friend Kyoko (need last name) is a closed-up shy tempered shape shifter. Then their is Yuuki (Sora’s BF)(needs last name) who is a popular tall gorgeous half vampire (his mother was a vamp. and his father was a human) kyoko secretly likes a guy named ( need first and last) who is an angel but he likes Sora and also is takin over by an evil (something) and becomes an angel of death. so if you could be so kind as to help me fill in the blanks and also come up with a title that would be AWESOME!!!
What Are The Main Things You Need In A Fantasy Story?
i am currently starting on a fantasy story about a girl with no powers whereas her best friend has the ablilty to fly and has a special rare flying squirrell as a animal thingy, her mum had died when she was about 2/3 and is currently joining her first day of voosca (magic school) even though she is without any powers. i was just wondering what would make it go that little bit further and b published,. What would make it enjoyable, gripping, yet emotional ,
PLEASE HELP!! x
Story Question Help Me?
I’m starting to write a story about a girl who becomes a witch. She already knows she’s going to be one when she turns fifteen.After that she has to go to a Magic school and stay in a dorm for a half of a year. The thing is, is that I don’t know how to start the story. I can’t just explain to the reader of that she is going to be a witch in bullets, I have to weave it into the story. Any ideas?
Also…if anybody copies me in my idea I will legally sue them…and….and…..and all that crap. I don’t know what I’m saying…
How Can I Start Off My Story?
I’m writing a story about these magical people with all these powers and i dont know how to start it the main chacter is a guy and he has sister. I have all this info and chacter profiles and stuff and also quotes but i need a start …Thats where u guys come in!
Oh & when i say i have quotes i mean things i want people to say latter on in my book
Main Character – Teddy Vesela
Sister – Melanie
They have magical powers but they dont know about it until they go to this MAGIC SCHOOL
They live at Broken Hill NSW Australia
and i just need a way to begin my story the start of my first chapter
Photosynthesis Story?
I need to write a story for photosynthesis including all the steps, light reactions, where it takes place, the calvin cycle, the importance of light, and factors that affect photosyntheses. I needed to make a story from this….maybe using the magic school bus…help??
